Monday, December 9, 2013

The Future

The other day, I met a boy named Phil and his family. They were on vacation from the 22nd century! Phil told me that they got a rented a time machine and they were on their way to a time way back in the day.
So I decided to call him Phil of the Future. Oh, Phil. He was keeping it together just as best as he can. What can I say? He's a 22nd century man!

So I asked Phil when he had to go back to the future. He said that he and his family were on a holiday through history, but the final destination was a mystery. Apparently, something on the time machine had blown, so they ended up right here in our time zone!

Phil of the future. He never knew in history just where he would land, but what can I say? He's a 22nd century man!

I Love My Sister

       Unfortunately, I never went to the writing center this semester. However, my sister, who is a writing fellow, was able to edit and revise my papers on many occasions. I felt that this was sufficient, and I received sold grades on my papers, all thanks to her.
       One of the papers my sister helped me with was the literacy narrative. At first, I didn't have quite enough dialogue, and she quick to point that out. Also, many comma splices were ousted thanks to her.
       Another paper my sister helped me with was the literary analysis. She felt that I was summarizing too much, and guided me in the right direction. I am so grateful for her help!

Monday, December 2, 2013