I think my draft is okay, but not great. I do think that I am great at filling up countless pages with meaningless garbage and making sound like I know what I am talking about.
There was not much to it actually. I just went to noodle tools and realized that my annotated bibliography did not help me at all. I then realized that I should have made at least a single notecard, lol. I had to look back at all my articles and pull quotes from there that I guess were relevant. ? I am sure that there are a number of things that Dr. D can help me change and make my final draft the best that it can be. Right now though, I don't agree with most of the things my essay says. I go on and on about how there should be "more security". Okay, that is so weak and general. Sure there are a few good points in there, but most of it is ridiculous.
For example, I bring up "safe gun technology", which is cool, but these guns would only make up .0000000000000001 percent of all the guns out there, it is just unreasonable.
Also, why do I try and pretend like pharmaceutical companies really pay attention to "who is taking what anxiety pill" or "who has depression". Besides, they cannot legally share that with the world any way. Bottom line, I still have a lot of work to do.
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Good post Eli! I like how you were truthful about how you felt about your paper. I agree with you that I was just filling pages just to meet the requirements.
ReplyDeleteThat it funny the way you put it. Don't worry Eli, we believe. <3 <3
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