I hop on my bike and go to the store
I'm so glad that I finished my chores
Make a quick left on College Drive
I'm so excited. Jump and Jive
Look over there its Crazy Steve
No thanks Crazy Steve
Hustle and bustle inside Walmart
I'm looking around, shopping smart
Go to the back to get new cards
Try to focus but it's so hard
A lot of cool things, ring-a-ding-dings
A bobble head of Martin Luther King
Out of money for the Easter Bunny
No more money for the Easter Bunny
1. repetition
2. alliteration
3. repetition
Thursday) Card College by Roberto Giobi-1 hr
Sunday) Card College by Roberto Giobi- 1 hr
This was probably my favorite poem to read. I really like your use of alliteration repetition. I really enjoyed this poem because reading it made me think of myself when I was younger... not really sure why though, but get use of the alliteration and repetition. It was fun to read.
ReplyDeleteI'm not sure that words rhyme with the same words but that took a lot of skill and time to do. Great work.
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